simple business card

[craiglee]

yay, nay?

http://i38.tinypic.com/317k5j9.jpg

[tim]

It's better than most! How about a phone number down the bottom right? Print it on nice linen card, perhaps make it not quite as tall as most business cards - widescreen kinda.

[symes]

It's better than most! How about a phone number down the bottom right? Print it on nice linen card, perhaps make it not quite as tall as most business cards - widescreen kinda.

If you're not printing your own, make it widescreen like they do in the movies - two black lines...It's nice...

Cheers,

[craiglee]

http://i38.tinypic.com/263kfew.jpg

[tim]

Maybe not quite that wide. And no phone number? You don't want people to call you? Email isn't reliable, I always call customers rather than email, commercial stuff gets eaten by spam filters more than personal stuff I think. Unless you and your friends talk about viagra a lot.

[craiglee]

ehh i guess i'll put it on. i'm just a computer person, but i suppose some people aren't.

[tim]

Spam filters eat random emails, that's just the way it is unfortunately. Another idea is to take the email address off, but put your contact details on the website.

Can you add a little space between the T, Y, and I? They run together a bit.

[cory1848]

Phone number? What kind of Business are you? Maybe use a selective color on some of the letters? I like the font choice but its too empty. Need to remember the function of a business card, mainly contact information with your logo branded on it.

[OdiN1701]

A little too simple perhaps. Maybe add just a little color.

Another problem - if I came across that card in a pile of cards after doing some networking somewhere....how will I know what you do? It says nothing about what service you or your business provides, and because of that may it may get lost/tossed. A card that has some basic info will jog someone's memory - "Oh I remember talking to him about this..."

[lulugus]

I'm thinking it's way too simple. You need to explain yourself. Try this:

http://lulugus.googlepages.com/newcard.jpg


:D

[simplified24]

I'm thinking it's way too simple. You need to explain yourself. Try this:

http://lulugus.googlepages.com/newcard.jpg


:D

both very very nice!

[cdifoto]

I'm thinking it's way too simple. You need to explain yourself. Try this:

http://lulugus.googlepages.com/newcard.jpg


:D
Subtle. :lol:

[lulugus]

I was thinking for a minute that people's brightness on their monitors might be too high to see the grayscale lettering. hehehe

[Vascilli]

That'd be pretty cool actually, if you could sum up what you do and how you got into it. I'll think about that for my card.

[MMD]

Nay.

The card does offer intrigue though. To a creative person, they are looking for more. To a potential client, you bring nothing to the table based on your BC (IMO). It doesnt appeal to me at all.