another sister picture

[clarity]

heres a random picture of my sister,
we wer at a drive thru @ in n out burger:D,
i just felt like playin with my camera and
i noticed she was geting sleepy or something
was on her mind? well let me know what
you think of it, critique it or give a heads up,
haha alright thanks in advance,
clarity

[jO3]

just my pov, but I think the highlight is distracting a bit... And I would like to see her full lips, maybe even her chin, rather than cut it off like that...

Otherwise, you did a great job of capturing her emotions in this shot, and it definitely shows in the pic!

How about a self-portrait?

[ExPOSED]

Would this be the In n Out Burger in Daly City? I too agree that you should try to get up to her chin within the shot. I love getting shots of people in a natural state rather than posing. It lets the person looking at the photo use their imagination as to what the person was feeling, thinking, etc.

[Candid Bandit]

Pretty good pretty good.. I would like it if her eye were a little more sharper. Seems like her hair next to her eye stole the focus a little bit. But thats just me... I love eyes..

[Eric DeCastro]

i like it. we need more. =)

[bitbytes9]

I like it, post more