Screw you!

[BermyFunk]

Here's a few screw shots i was experimenting with...

1. I saw this idea with pens on POTN and he did a great job so i decided to give it a try. It's a still life of screws in motion.
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b246/BermyFunk/Screws3of3.jpg

2. I would like some criticism on this one... I had a idea in my head of making New York City out of screws but I dont think i executed it well....how can i make it better?

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b246/BermyFunk/Screws2of3.jpg

[jbrown7815]

Cool concept, I like the detail.

What lens did you use for them?

[BermyFunk]

good ol' nifty fifty

[jbrown7815]

good ol' nifty fifty
Figured :cool:

[troutfisher]

I like no 1, not sure about no 2, it is too busy-it has too many screws/nails

[::John::]

of, maybe, you are too high?

I dunno. I like the thought and idea - but the perspective doesn't do it for me. May I suggest you try it from a lower angle - as if you are are looking at buildings from ground level?


Or - maybe that's just what my mind was expecting - lol. Don't mind me - just thinking out loud.

I like the creativity.

[BermyFunk]

the nails are suppose to be water by the way lol...i know its not clear but it is still a thought in progress....thanks for the criticism guys

[vroom]

the nails are suppose to be water by the way lol...i know its not clear but it is still a thought in progress....thanks for the criticism guys

I like them both.

[midnight_rider]

On number one the bottom right corner (on what I am assuming is a piece of paper) IMO should be flat to produce a better insinuation of motion. I really like the idea though. I also agree that a better angle would have helped with the dynamics.