mazda minitruck

[costa07]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h43/sbsoccer18gk/my%20truck/anthonydone.jpg

C&C PLEASE :)

i personally feel like something is missing.. from this photo ...but i dont know what it is? haha
can anyone help me out with that also

costa

[shavedaccord]

Did he have the air ride completely deflated? or just no body drop? Good photo but yeah you are right something does seem to be missing..

[-MasterChief-]

i think the horizon is slightly tilted and the overall shot is a tad underexposed which makes the colors a little muted. the shot needs to be composed better also, IMHO.

btw, welcome to the forums! keep shooting! :D

[costa07]

Did he have the air ride completely deflated? or just no body drop? Good photo but yeah you are right something does seem to be missing..


yea he is laid out in this photo, no body drop

[costa07]

i think the horizon is slightly tilted and the overall shot is a tad underexposed which makes the colors a little muted. the shot needs to be composed better also, IMHO.

btw, welcome to the forums! keep shooting! :D


i think i agree on being tilted i didnt quite look at it that hard but i do see it. i didnt use a tripod..this photo happened spare of the moment...

well the truck is painted in an epoxy primer with a very light clear coat...it has no shine to it almost

what do ya mean by composed better ?

thnaks for the C&C

[RadAL]

i think i agree on being tilted i didnt quite look at it that hard but i do see it. i didnt use a tripod..this photo happened spare of the moment...

well the truck is painted in an epoxy primer with a very light clear coat...it has no shine to it almost

what do ya mean by composed better ?

thnaks for the C&C


theres a lot of negative space at the top (too much sky)... maybe raising the camera a little more?

[costa07]

theres a lot of negative space at the top (too much sky)... maybe raising the camera a little more?


should i have "cut it off" above the tree line

[CameraMan741]

shot looks pretty good, but the car doesnt seem to 'pop' from the picture...

and i know whats missing. its the ground clearence. lol jk

[costa07]

shot looks pretty good, but the car doesnt seem to 'pop' from the picture...

and i know whats missing. its the ground clearence. lol jk


yea i kinda came to that conclusion... but i think something else is missing too.


ground clearance.....whats that :rolleyes:

note: i also drive a mintruck :)

[PhotosGuy]

i personally feel like something is missing.. Maybe some nice highlights in the side? Seen this?
A few Car Lighting Tips - Updated (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=70290)


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/PhotosGuy/Forum%20Junk/Welcome-ChargerRT_020.gif

[costa07]

Maybe some nice highlights in the side? Seen this?
A few Car Lighting Tips - Updated (http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=70290)


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/PhotosGuy/Forum%20Junk/Welcome-ChargerRT_020.gif


thanks

hopefully doing this background again with several other trucks...hopefully i can find good places were i dont have to risk getting a ticket of some sort