Mwalid
31st of August 2008 (Sun), 20:08
C&C are more than welcome i am trying to get better so please advise.
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philthejuggler
1st of September 2008 (Mon), 15:52
A reasonable attempt at selective colouring, just a little bleeding above the blue sweet nearest the camera. I feel my eyes are drawn to the pink sweet at the top, but it is not clearly defined - I think it's heading out of the field of focus and could be better placed.
If you'd not coloured the pink one, maybe a more clearly captured sweet at the front would have become the point to which my eyes are drawn.
Phil
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