Need CC for my wedding portfolio

[skysi]

Actually, if you, folks, have time for a little bit of browsing I'd just like you to tell me which pictures I would definitely have to keep and, maybe also, which to discard for sure. You can refer to picture number. You can see numbers if you hover your mouse over a thumbnail. I'll also post a couple of random pictures here.
Thanks a lot in advance.

http://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v3/p512710407-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v0/p429942079-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v0/p53740362-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v0/p562580125-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v1/p695344515-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v0/p1000683143-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v0/p1064480936-5.jpghttp://www.phototerrestrial.com/img/v1/p333078110-5.jpg


Here's the link to the portfolio:
http://www.phototerrestrial.com/f311285874/

[skysi]

no takers:o)?

[Visual Bride]

You need to number these. Also they are huge and I am on a 30" screen!

3, 6 and 8 are keepers.

1. A bit gloomy but a possible candidate.
2.Kinda cool. Dislike how the groom is using the dress as a floor mat. Also the B/G are way of center.
3. Really like this one. Slightly washed out. But it's stylistic.
4. Shes very pretty but this is not a flattering pic. Bad timing.
5. Wet, soggy hands. Yuck!
6. Brilliant shot. Great timing. Good composition. Dislike the green processing. Easy to fix.
7. Nothing shot. The boys expression is off.
8. Beautiful! A bit over processed and blown out. Still a great picture. She a model?

If these were from one wedding ok. But a portfolio is the pick of the best of all your wedding work. If this is all your best work then you need to really push yourself a lot harder. Looking at your site, you have a lot better.

[skysi]

You need to number these. Also they are huge and I am on a 30" screen!

Me too :cool:

3, 6 and 8 are keepers.

1. A bit gloomy but a possible candidate.

Agree about a bit of gloominess.

2.Kinda cool. Dislike how the groom is using the dress as a floor mat. Also the B/G are way of center.

Actually, he was kneeling on a rug, was afraid to soil his pants :). But, yes, it does look like he's stepping on the dress.
I didn't think it was that important to put them in the center. It might have looked better, though. They ended up loving that one. Go figure :cool:

3. Really like this one. Slightly washed out. But it's stylistic.
I really enjoy processing. maybe a little too much at times.

4. Shes very pretty but this is not a flattering pic. Bad timing.
You maybe right, but I can't see yet why the timing was bad

5. Wet, soggy hands. Yuck!
Mom ended up liking it a lot it, though :)

6. Brilliant shot. Great timing. Good composition. Dislike the green processing. Easy to fix.

Yep, I had a strange feeling about this one, too. You right, it needs to be warmed up.

7. Nothing shot. The boys expression is off.

Agree, but the girl is just so beautiful. Looking at her I wish I had a daughter :)

8. Beautiful! A bit over processed and blown out. Still a great picture. She a model?

I guess you know a model when you see one. Yes, she is a model for a bridal magazine. Beautiful South Russian Model.

If these were r from 3 weddings. But a portfolio is the pick of the best of all your wedding work. If this is all your best work then you need to really push yourself a lot harder. Looking at your site, you have a lot better.
I've just shot 8 weddings as a second shooter. These were randoms from 3 weddings and a bridal magazine shoot (was helping another photog). Hope to get better and better, of course.
Thank you for your C&C. It was short but truly valuable and I appreciate it. You have a really good eye for photography.

[reefergal]

I really like the last one