newbie trying portrait shots..CC please..

[bhonez8]

guys, did i overdid it or was too pale?

thanks for the C&C..


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[FlyingPhotog]

I don't necessarily mind the etherial glow in #1

But #2... OY! :rolleyes:
(of course, you're free to do as you like but I'm not feelin' it...)

[Flo]

I don't necessarily mind the etherial glow in #1

But #2... OY! :rolleyes:
(of course, you're free to do as you like but I'm not feelin' it...)
Me too......

[Walczak Photo]

I have to agree with the general consensus here. I'm all for "artistic interpretations" and all, but that second shot....ummm...not to be rude but, I don't get it.

Peace,
Jim

[swjim]

Sorry, but these don't work for me either.

[griptape]

The lips in #2 are just plain scary.