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cb7builder
10th of September 2008 (Wed), 20:21
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v249/HurtsSoGoodxxx/awesome-oedit1.jpg
Shot at a different WB
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v249/HurtsSoGoodxxx/IMG_2487.jpg

18mm, ISO 100, BULB @40sec., f/14
This is my first night shot, please C&C as harshly as you want, thanks!

1downfall
10th of September 2008 (Wed), 20:43
I think you nialed it! I love the warm colors and lighting! IMO i would clone the 1 tiny bright spot next to the moon i think......nicely done!

cb7builder
10th of September 2008 (Wed), 20:44
Thank you very much, I thought about cloning it out but this is straight out of the camera so far.

Darsk47
10th of September 2008 (Wed), 21:13
Did you set the WB? Moon could be whiter.

It looks nice but a bit too orange for me.

Vetteography
10th of September 2008 (Wed), 21:26
I like the shot, but I would probably do a little sharpening, drop a cooling filter on it (or adjust white balance) and desaturate it a little bit.

All personal taste, of course, and you may think I am full of doo-doo :p

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f260/preacherspulpit/Touchups/ContainerShip.jpg

cb7builder
11th of September 2008 (Thu), 02:04
I agree with it being a little too warm, I posted the same shot at a different WB

eror11
11th of September 2008 (Thu), 18:49
I'd crop out the lights on the left, they're a bit too distracting... other then that, the one that's less red is better :D