Afew portrait shots

[trey]

This was taken a few months ago, the first day I got my 10D. Shot with my 50mm f/1.8

http://www.scelusweb.com/aw/aw45.jpg


This is a self-portrait taken recently. Taken with my 10D, sigma 24-70 f/2.8, and Speedlite 420 EX

http://www.scelusweb.com/self.jpg

What do you think?

[Curos]

I like the first one, but the DoF maybe a little shallow. The part in focus is the eye that is covered up, it would be better for her uncovered eye to be in focus (too). On the Self Portrait, try some different cropping and see if you come up with anything you like.