Moccasins BW

[ChP]

I liked the way the light from the door was hitting the carpet and creating a line across the shoes. Was wondering what people here think of this shot. What could have been done to make this shot better?

[roanjohn]

Hmmm...........its a tad boring...........nothing in the picture interest me. I would've included a little more to the scene..........maybe a huge empty space, and on the lower corner, these sad lonely moccasins...........would probably create more interest........just these shoes on the dead middle of the frame looks like a catalogue shot or something - very generic.

Experiment.............thats my advice.

Ro1