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seisky
23rd of September 2008 (Tue), 21:52
my first time shooting boy's soccer, and last time this season :/ I uploaded 25 to flickr. these might be used for the school paper and/or yearbook. I'll just post my favorites for crit.

1. players celebrating a quick goal. a little overexposed, but I like the emotion.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3072/2883886552_a9e394d79e.jpg?v=0



2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3069/2883900582_443bc8c6fa.jpg?v=0


3. should crop out the player on the left of the frame.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3254/2883922170_9b9d219c5d.jpg?v=0


4.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3013/2883925098_f78ae2d397.jpg?v=0

5.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3244/2883926646_bff6c2e1ed.jpg?v=0

6.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3181/2883932304_8fb8920a68.jpg?v=0

7.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3051/2883107179_071cfcdec1.jpg?v=0

8. Parent's Night...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3153/2883947496_2b668e359f.jpg?v=0

seisky
24th of September 2008 (Wed), 00:05
anyone?

40Dude6aedyk
24th of September 2008 (Wed), 00:54
That pitch looks pretty tough to play on: the ball will just roll downhill into the goal.

seisky
24th of September 2008 (Wed), 07:55
some of them are crooked, haha. I'll have to clean em up a little.

tomcat360
24th of September 2008 (Wed), 09:42
If you shot in raw you should be able to fix that first one.

Crop tight on the second.

Add some blacks (and probably have to compensate with more exposure) to the third, I would say crop some of the goal out and leave both players in there.

corythosaurus
24th of September 2008 (Wed), 10:55
Not bad. I like the emotion of #1 as well. Looks like some contrast and horizon corrections are needed.

Were you standing?