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SuperFly
10th of February 2005 (Thu), 11:23
Hi,
Byron's Famous Lighthouse, captured in RAW, imported into CS, some adjustments to aperture, brightness, contrast, removed noise using neatimage.
I'd like feedback on which composition looks better (admittedly, #2 is not as sharp as #1 and has a slight CW tilt), but for future i'd like to know what people think.
Which would do you see as a postcard image? :D
http://87.200.46.98/cdpforums/byron_lighthouse.jpg
Exif #1
Tv: 1/3
Av: f/4.5
ISO: 200
Focal Length: 35mm
Thanks.
sparker1
10th of February 2005 (Thu), 15:02
I prefer the first. Rails often add interest, but this one doesn't do it for me.
Andy_T
10th of February 2005 (Thu), 15:59
I also like the first one best.
The lighthouse is leaning to the right to a lesser extent :lol:
Otherwise, nice picture.
Best regards,
Andy
Khaja
10th of February 2005 (Thu), 16:23
I agree......#1.
Khaja
SuperFly
10th of February 2005 (Thu), 20:30
Great, thanks for the feedback guys,
Andy, the left edge of the lighthouse i think has a taper while the right edge appears to be vertical :confused:
I was using one of those little green level indicators from manfrotto inserted in the camera's hotshoe ;) but looks like it wasn't perfect. (camera was on a tripod of course).
Here's another shot of that lighthouse.
Exif:
Tv: 1/1000
Av: f/8
ISO: 200
Focal Length: 18mm
http://80.227.59.233/cdpforums/byron_lighthouse03.jpg
Regards,
Jetpilot
11th of February 2005 (Fri), 07:21
I actually like the composition in number 2 better. If the lighthouse were in focus, all you'd have to do is rotate the image a smidge in CS and I think you'd have a very interesting picture.
#1 is the same picture everyone else will take. Its a nice picture, but just nothing special about it.
Reigh Higgins
11th of February 2005 (Fri), 07:27
I like the first one.
aam1234
11th of February 2005 (Fri), 10:38
Hey man, great job! I like both but leaning towards the first.
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