a new one to the fourms my first pictures...

[adam jarus]

I just recently purchased a Visatec Solo 1600B kit. Here are some of my first shots let me know what i could do better. I know the background isn't perfect, but I'm working on it.

Both shot with the 20d first is with the 50 1.8 MK II and the 2nd is with the 17-35 L.

[Geeeyejo]

Nice model, nice equipment, nice work!

[Citizensmith]

The first one is excellent, the second one good (I don't like the framing as much). Well posed, well lit, sharp. Nice work

[RJSorensen]

Looks like fun and also nice . . . I would like to try that someday.

[colliewalker1]

Very good composition,exposure and focussing: in the second portrait I would prefer the model's hair not to be in her eyes.

[adam jarus]

i struggled with that all day. it just how she styled her her hair i suppose. thanks for all the comments

[chris.bailey]

I really like the first one, her expression is rather sexxy.