fun at the park [Archive] - Canon Digital Photography Forums

tdoshi9

28th of September 2008 (Sun), 22:40

playing with bubbles and swinging on a swing.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v714/tdoshi9/IMG_7802.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v714/tdoshi9/IMG_7874.jpg

what do you think?

tdoshi9

29th of September 2008 (Mon), 19:49

no thoughts?

Phil.hearing

29th of September 2008 (Mon), 19:56

did u get more shots with the bubbles? cos the child isnt really doing anything w the bubbles in the 2 shot kinda makes it a bit lifeless

christyjo2

29th of September 2008 (Mon), 20:09

Very cute little girl. It would be better if you can have her interacting with the bubbles. And another thing that I would suggest is maybe boosting the contrast/curves a bit so that the colors pop a bit more.

tdoshi9

29th of September 2008 (Mon), 20:28

she ran to the bubbles and i snapped... agreed the colors comment

tdoshi9

29th of September 2008 (Mon), 20:57

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v714/tdoshi9/IMG_7847.jpg how about this one?

nadya

3rd of October 2008 (Fri), 15:58

yes ...colors look dull.
Second picture ...maybe should be cropped. It lacks composition.