At the Park

[junebug]

New lens first shots. Please give me some feedback. 24-105L
Thanks...

[KatiaShermanPhotography]

PROS:
nice exposure and sharpening!
and most of all VERY cute model you got there =)

CONS:
I would want to see less of background...what F stop did you use? try the lowest oen like F1.8 or at least f4 it will help you seperate your model from background especially when its so busy
Also kinda poor choice of location in many levels: she is sitting right at the adge of teh grass, the banches look kinda like wings on each side of her, and a tree just not doing anything for me. The eye goes stright to teh banch panel that goes through her head.
The pose: maybe tilting her a bit instead of streight to the camera?

[FocalPrincess]

PROS:
nice exposure and sharpening!
and most of all VERY cute model you got there =)

CONS:
I would want to see less of background...what F stop did you use? try the lowest oen like F1.8 or at least f4 it will help you seperate your model from background especially when its so busy

Unfortunately that lens only goes to f4.

It looks like you'll do very well with your new lens! They sure do give sharp colors, don't they?