Weekend Candids

[roastpuff]

So, I shot these over the weekend at church before/after my fellowship meeting. Some CC would be appreciated...

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Thanks! =)

[scslmd]

Enjoyed #1, 5, 6 in particular.
#1 has a beautiful bright smile, but wish you had a more shallow DOF. The background is a bit distracting.
#5 has a nice illumination from the overhead projector... but casted shadow over her eyes.
#6 has a good angle from below instead of the normal straight-on snap shot.

Almost a documentary feel...

[acchildress]

[quote=roastpuff;6400963]So, I shot these over the weekend at church before/after my fellowship meeting. Some CC would be appreciated...

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3223/2897730984_56c1e53b61_b.jpg
This one looks pretty good. It would be nice if it had gone a little lower and gotten all of here hand in also. Crop it a little tighter on the left to get out that black edge of something.

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This one had some possiblilty but I would have focused on the hand with the marker in it. As it is the focus is on the body of the nearest person who is unrecogniseable.
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I like this one except that the angle makes it look like the table is sitting on a hill. In some photos that would be great but I don't think it works here.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2079/2896860969_a937944a22_b.jpg
This one needs a little more depth of field so that more of the posters are in focus.
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I like this one.
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This one is pretty good also.
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THis one just escapes me though. What is the subject? Are you making a statement about the legs, shoes people interacting? Why did you cut off all their heads?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3213/2897659352_0898f3c08c_b.jpg

I think you've got a start here but again I would like more dof. I think you were probably limited in light but you could have turned up the ISO knob and used a smaller f-stop.

On the other hand, all of them looked like they had correct of near correct exposure, at least on my monitor.

This is just my opinion and I'm not dead yet so I'm still learning to. Good luck.