Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot

[DocFrankenstein]

http://photo.klein-jensen.dk/public/Dia_Hair_Web.jpg
http://photo.klein-jensen.dk/public/Dia_Wall_Web.jpg
I'm posting these for critique. What should I change?

Please comment

[cmM]

I like the second one, nice composition and cool expression from the model. Not too fond of the frame however :)

[DocFrankenstein]

I like the second one, nice composition and cool expression from the model. Not too fond of the frame however :)The thing is that I can't figure out how to crop the second picture.

You see, it's only interesting if that line is horisontal, because of the converging lines... But if I make the line horizontal, when I crop it, the bricklines get cut out, and without converging lines it no longer seems interesting.

So after about 40 mins of experimentation, I ended up just rotating it without cropping.

If anyone wants to take a shot at cropping that girl, please go ahead and post what you come up with.

Or did you mean the white frame in the first pic?

[Cash--]

Personally I like it the way you did it best, Doc Frankenstein, but here's my attempt at cropping.

[rickc]

God shots Doc. Excellent portrait, and that's my favorite of the two.

[DocFrankenstein]

rickc: Which one do u mean exactly? First or second?
Cash: Intresting crop