New CC please

[Mr Stevey]

Hi peeps,

great forum i've found and am loving the depth of many of the members and their photography, advice and much more..

anyhoo, would love some feedback! done some PP, but would like further advice...
cheers

http://idisk.mac.com/mrstevey-Public/AO_Cafe.jpg

[KarlosDaJackal]

I don't see any picture?

[nbaer89]

Yeah it doesn't really do anything for me. I see you were trying to do something but it didn't work.

[Flo]

Would have worked for me if they had been looking at you? Surprised?

[chomish]

I see what your trying to do, but i think there has to be a different scene going on here for it to be good.
Try looking for scenes which are more interesting. Something that catches your eye.
If i was walking by, i wouldnt have done a double take, its just boring.

[Mr Stevey]

sure.. thanks and points taken :)