Few randoms

[spink]

C&C is welcome.

Thanks.


http://spink.ca/pics/forums/fredmiranda/IMG_2597b.jpg



http://spink.ca/pics/forums/fredmiranda/IMG_2532.jpg

[Flo]

First one could use some light.but its cute,,second one is fun;)

[Robert_Lay]

I really like the first shot - she is a real beauty, and I like the pose and the setting and the exposure and color balance, etc. My only problem is very minor, and that is that her hair has a some tonal merger with the background in some places. It would have been better if her hair were backed up with something not so close in tone.

Composition -- she could be just a little more to the left in the picture, and it would be nice if she could shape her hands differently to get rid of the "claw" look.

[aram535]

Is the first one real? I don't think the lighting matches on the body vs the background. Either way it could be turned into a portrait and it would improve, I think -- there is a lot of wasted space on the left.

[spink]

Yup it's real... I dropped the ambient by about a stop and used the flash to fill.

Thanks for your comments.

Is the first one real? I don't think the lighting matches on the body vs the background. Either way it could be turned into a portrait and it would improve, I think -- there is a lot of wasted space on the left.