Reluctant Models

[poebar]

This is my son and his girlfriend. Needless to say I had to weedle them to pose for me, but in the end they both liked this one. I'm still in the learning process so and c&c is welcome.

Thanks for looking

[philthejuggler]

Nice pose. Colour washed out and possibly has a slight cast, although my laptop screen is not calibrated. Composition poor in my opinion - heads in centre of frame rarely look good - try boosting the saturation slighty and then cropping the image to give a portrait-orientation with the girls eyes about 1/3 of the way up the frame.

[audai]

very good :)

[fadetoblack22]

Some advice would be to zoom in closer (or step closer) and use a lower f stop to bring them out from the background.