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joshbehan
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 14:05
I shot this wedding at the Harkness Mansion in Waterford, CT this past Saturday. It was an amazing fall day with plenty of sunshine. Jen, Randy, and their families were fantastic to work with, and made me feel very welcome and comfortable all day. Comments, and Critiques welcome, and thanks for looking

#1 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready2.jpg

#2 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready7.jpg

#3 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready6.jpg

#4 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready8.jpg

#5 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready10.jpg

#6http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready12.jpg
father-daughter dance

#7 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready15.jpg

#8 http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb239/joshbehan/ready14.jpg
PaulGallagher
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 15:56
Some great shots, 5 I think would look better with the bride looking at camera and the groom looking at the bride.

6 covers too much of her face.

8 is the money shot, great composition and moment.
joshbehan
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:16
Some great shots, 5 I think would look better with the bride looking at camera and the groom looking at the bride.

6 covers too much of her face.

8 is the money shot, great composition and moment.

thanks for the input paul, i definitely agree about 5, i have a few more from under that tree that i'll have to look through
PaulGallagher
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:30
The composition and exposure is perfect, just their pose but you have done a great job.
Atiyeh
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:56
I agree ... exposure is great! Keep it up.
Ziffle
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 21:20
nice job....
like #8 (sweet) and the first 3.....
IMHO - being a bit critical:
#3 greater DOF the front of the flower is out of focus. might have more impact in B&W
#4 does nothing for me. This could be personal to the couple.
#5 the tree looks menacing-snake like as shot - maybe its me... it over powers the couple.
#7 i can not see enough of the curved building - looks cool. My eyes keep wanting to look at the bare branches above the couple instead of the structure.

Overall, i like the creativity...... thank for sharing
kelvinleung
15th of October 2008 (Wed), 12:21
Like #8. For #5, if the bride looked at the camera. It would be better.