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hudsonp
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 14:55
my daughter, she turns two in December

http://hudsonp.googlepages.com/fall08.jpg


http://hudsonp.googlepages.com/fall08-1.jpg

sevillafox
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:10
These seem a little soft to me and the wrinkles in the BG are a little distracting. But, your daughter is lovely, the smiles are great, and those curls are to die for.

potn_momma2
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 17:37
wow she looks older than 2!!
i'd blur out the background more and increase exposure on the first, but lovely pics what a cute smile

Skrim17
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 17:39
at f/1.8 your focal plane is very narrow, note how the writing on her shirt in the second shot is in focus but not her face, you need to stop the lens down.

rmr21
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 19:00
These seem a little soft to me and the wrinkles in the BG are a little distracting. But, your daughter is lovely, the smiles are great, and those curls are to die for.


My thoughts exactly.

Skrim17
14th of October 2008 (Tue), 19:05
a touch of sharpening, levels and desaturating the yellow a bit:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y116/skrim/nextone/boo.jpg

KaseyK
15th of October 2008 (Wed), 14:12
they are a little soft and out of focus but still cute

potn_momma2
15th of October 2008 (Wed), 22:35
a touch of sharpening, levels and desaturating the yellow a bit:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y116/skrim/nextone/boo.jpg

still looks a bit yellow, but maybe that's my monitor... much sharper though

Skrim17
15th of October 2008 (Wed), 22:47
yeah it is still yellow, I mostly wanted to see how it would look with the USM.

JustMyLuck
17th of October 2008 (Fri), 08:10
Check your focusing. It is too soft on the face. Cute pictures.

jenirose3
17th of October 2008 (Fri), 15:16
#1 is soft and underexposed (up the AP and make sure the SS is at least 125)
#2 is soft and the BG is distracting (see above for soft issue and bring her further away from the BG)

She sure is a cutie!

StroupePhotography
19th of October 2008 (Sun), 00:07
Here is a fast try at the second one. Was this what you was looking for ? She is a cutie pie.

benmanon
19th of October 2008 (Sun), 06:58
as other people are saying, I think the focus was done on the t-shirt and not on the face. At f1.8, the focus should of been done one on her eye. Still nice pictures, PP might of fixed part of these issue.

BeN

hudsonp
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 08:19
thanks for the C&C - she is two and i'm possible to get to pose, most of those where shot in a few bursts to anything worth working with.

that last edit is very nice, and pretty much was i was hoping to achieve.