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eric gautier
16th of October 2008 (Thu), 20:26
would love to hear feedback on shots/pp.

1)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_8598b.jpg

2)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_7439.jpg

3)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_8298.jpg

4)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_7344.jpg

5) father, bride & groom exchange. couldn't avoid the sun.. maybe a b&w PP?
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_7623.jpg

6)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_7807.jpg

7)
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_8390.jpg

8 )
http://www.eestudios.us/101108_aj/IMG_8024.jpg
Atiyeh
16th of October 2008 (Thu), 21:11
4.6.7 are champs! Nice work.
sayn3ver
16th of October 2008 (Thu), 23:57
4 is just fantastic. it has that bad ass gang feel, like bring it on.

"wild wild west"
creme.brulee
17th of October 2008 (Fri), 02:18
I second that. #4 is fantastic! I love it.

I also dig the first two.
blondine
17th of October 2008 (Fri), 07:43
# 4 is awesome! nice series
Focused Moments
18th of October 2008 (Sat), 00:30
I concur - you nailed 4.
BeritOlam
18th of October 2008 (Sat), 02:36
you nailed 4.

So did the bride after the wedding!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
Focused Moments
18th of October 2008 (Sat), 16:41
So did the bride after the wedding!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Oh god! LOL!!!:rolleyes:
Subimatt
18th of October 2008 (Sat), 20:08
great shots!
collierportraits
18th of October 2008 (Sat), 22:17
No, I like the backlighting in #5. I wouldn't PP it out or try to mess with it. You may want to pump saturation a bit on it but I think it adds a twist. Makes it more interesting!

Great shots overall. Nice job! ;)
eric gautier
19th of October 2008 (Sun), 00:06
thanks for the reply everyone!
benmanon
19th of October 2008 (Sun), 06:50
# 4 is very nice

BeN
kdg
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 09:03
#4 is a great shot... but I love #2!! The bride looks so happy.
notapro
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 10:08
Great shots! I agree 4 is the killer shot, and the flare on 5 doesn't bother me at all. Nice work!
mananetwork
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 15:01
1) Background is to visible, couple bleed into it also.
2) Looks ok
3) Sun is to harsh, to much room above their heads. Zoom in to capture the moment more
4) Looks good except for the Groom, his pose is to stiff. Next time watch for his vest and hands, both his hands could've been in his pockets with his vest unbuttoned.
5) I guess the hood didn't help here, flare looks HORRIBLE! Could have positioned yourself better before hand to avoid this.
6) Don't really know what's going on, maybe a tighter crop?
7) Crop it more and it's a keeper, good job!
8) Composition is good, but lighting lighting lighting! I think if you had a bounce card to your right, it would have made a world of difference! Some catch light would have worked too, eyes look pretty dead.
eric gautier
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 16:51
1) Background is to visible, couple bleed into it also.
2) Looks ok
3) Sun is to harsh, to much room above their heads. Zoom in to capture the moment more
4) Looks good except for the Groom, his pose is to stiff. Next time watch for his vest and hands, both his hands could've been in his pockets with his vest unbuttoned.
5) I guess the hood didn't help here, flare looks HORRIBLE! Could have positioned yourself better before hand to avoid this.
6) Don't really know what's going on, maybe a tighter crop?
7) Crop it more and it's a keeper, good job!
8) Composition is good, but lighting lighting lighting! I think if you had a bounce card to your right, it would have made a world of difference! Some catch light would have worked too, eyes look pretty dead.

appreciate the comments.
moeronn
20th of October 2008 (Mon), 17:03
Great series. My favorites are 3 & 4. Only critique is to maybe bump up the exposure on 1 about half a stop or so - if you can do so without blowing out the dress.

Thanks for sharing.