1st Off-camera portrait shots

[Viffer06]

Strobist 101 here I come-- :D

#1

http://rsalcedo.smugmug.com/photos/400566489_iuT3r-L.jpg

#2

http://rsalcedo.smugmug.com/photos/400566614_5DLFj-L.jpg

[samoan_ridah]

Hey those are some great shots! Mind giving some info on the setup and the conditions surrounding this shoot?

[SuzyView]

Very nice. Only concern is her arm showing on the second shot. Did you want to put the sleeve down next time as sometimes, uneven tones are distracting. I know it may be a part of her, but for a portrait, you want us to see her face.

[ByTheBrooke]

that 2nd shot has beautiful tones, but I agree with Suzie-and beyond the uneven tones, the turned up sleeve is distracting. Great lighting. I too would love to hear your setup :)

[tft1974]

I like the second one the best, nice traditional pose. I agrre make one last check to make sure the clothing is not wrinkled before you shot. These little details may drive you nuts when you go to pp. With that said my wife who is not into photography would not notice it.

[GAinGa]

Hey those are some great shots! Mind giving some info on the setup and the conditions surrounding this shoot?

YES PLEEEEEEEEEEEEZE! They look fantastic.... and Lord knows the model could not have been any prettier!! WOW!! They "POP" to me!

[BeckyMax]

Really very nice, I"m sure the parents will only notice their beautiful child. Love your lighting on her in both pictures.