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melindac
27th of October 2008 (Mon), 22:19
Please CC!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3217/2983255216_8d55622325_b.jpg

KarlosDaJackal
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 03:20
black dot in the middle of the sky is totally grabbing my attention, get rid of that quick.

Flo
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 10:08
Feels OOF to me..

spooch
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:44
it's nice but bit oof. loose the dot in the background. cloning should do the trick ;)
love the colors

melindac
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 21:28
Thanks for all the critique. To make it more in focus should I have used a smaller aperture? The aperture was set at f/5.6

DragonDan
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 23:56
I'm not sure the aperture is to blame. Looks to me like the area of best focus is about 1/3 into the shot, or right below the ducks on LH side. I might also consider loosing the RH ducks via crop, the shot doesn't seem to need them. Colors are nice!

JuiceBox
29th of October 2008 (Wed), 17:37
Definitely clone out those babies on the right. I think the composition would be much better if they were gone. Other than that, you might be able to fix it by sharpening it up a bit, but it would have been much easier to just focus correctly in the first place.