View Full Version : Derelict building.
28th of October 2008 (Tue), 16:13
First attempt at derilict shots.
29th of October 2008 (Wed), 19:19
It almost looks like two different people shot these; the second one is great! I get this feeling people should be sitting there, depressed and lonely, even though they are together. The first one is just blegh.
6th of November 2008 (Thu), 15:08
Whats blegh ? be more constructive in your critisism.
6th of November 2008 (Thu), 15:48
Well, take a look at your second shot; you managed to make a boring subject interesting through your composition and exposure, which created an overall mood to the photo, which I described in my first post. The first photo also has a boring subject, but you didn't do anything unique with it; you shot the sink at a weird angle that throws the viewer off. You centered the subject, which is typically a big no-no, and you have no dramatic lighting in it.
Now that I'm looking at them on my own monitor, the second shot could stand to be a bit sharper.
8th of November 2008 (Sat), 21:24
i agree with juicebox here
the second shot sets a great mood, creepy and lonley. ugh gives me the chills
excelent job and great work
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