Girl and Girl

[betebete]

Just want some critique on these, i cant reshoot them sadly :/ So i have to do/improve the shots i have. Im not sure if i like these or not..
Used 430ex flash.


Katrine:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3042/3008723727_15b8ce72e6_o.jpg

Anja:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3160/3008733267_4e42d1f69a_b.jpg

[devgrp]

I like the first one. Second one seems a little orange. If you have PS, add a cyan photo filter layer to correct the skin tone

[ashleynaugust]

Something about her left eye in the 2nd one looks a bit unreal, overprocessed. It may be lighter naturally but it doesn't look that way.

[dadCameraGuy]

Very interesting shots - i like them both. First one's a little hot directly on her face, but workable. agree second one is a bit orange.

[SwingBopper]

Both very interesting and unusual shots because of the expressions. Turn image editing on and you'll probably get some different takes on editing. I'd play with B&W for #2. Her eyes look OK to me.

[spooch]

# 1 is really good but i would croop it a bit to loose the lower part of the photo

[Flo]

Unusual and I like them.

[mickdo100]

I like them both, though i am not keen on the peeling paint on the first, but really good all the same

[10megapixel]

I played around with the second image in photoshop and will post it here if it's ok with you. Just turn on "image editing Ok" in your profile ;)

[ben_r_]

Interesting background on the first one, not really liking the second one.

[betebete]

Image editing turned on now.
Play around :)

[10megapixel]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i199/laserbug/3008733267_4e42d1f69a_bcopy3.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i199/laserbug/3008733267_4e42d1f69a_bcopy4copy.jpg

I like the second one. Very pretty model and she looks legitimately pissed about something...lol

[Nathan]

Not to be crude... and maybe I've yet to mature... but in the second picture, I can't resist but look down her blouse. It's a bit distracting, although the point of interest is supposed to be her expression.

[telles75]

I like the edit on the second one. I think in the original #2 the eyes were re-touched a bit too much for my taste, they look like she was wearing contacts :)

[1shot4u]

#2 looks like it really hurts..but I like it..cool

[irishvintagecars]

JESUS CHRIST WHAT DID YOU DO TO THAT WOMAN. HIT HER. second picture is the one for me. reminds me of the motherinlaw

[kiwichris]

Not to be crude... and maybe I've yet to mature... but in the second picture, I can't resist but look down her blouse. It's a bit distracting, although the point of interest is supposed to be her expression.

............... ermmmmmmmmm yeah, me too ;)