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tft1974
7th of November 2008 (Fri), 10:33
Taken in the early morning, North facing window, hand held. c&c needed.

jgrussell
7th of November 2008 (Fri), 11:38
Pretty child, and a good concept. However, the image is very dark. You can't distinguish between his iris and his pupil in his eyes. The focus point doesn't appear to be his eyes. At 1/10th of a second and f7.1, you could easily have opened up the lens to get a better result.

tft1974
7th of November 2008 (Fri), 14:04
Thanks for looking. When I was doing this shot I was tring to capture the shadows on his face, and forgot about some portrait basic in the process.

Dermit
7th of November 2008 (Fri), 15:31
Main problem is it is not sharp. The eyes should be tack sharp especially this close of a crop, and they are not. it feels underexposed and those dark shadows could be lighter. shadows are good, but not when they show no detail... unless you are going for a dramatic look, which rarely fits the look with a baby/young child.