Some Portraits , honest comments welcome.

[fridayphunnies]

320474Some shots , looking for comments

[jesselee]

i love the first one. the tight crop is really nice.

im not a fan of black backgrounds so i don't know what to say about the second one.

good work!

[roman_t]

almost classic shot in 1. great mood in second. both looks too warm at my monitor.

[SwingBopper]

Looks like too much yellow in both. Her teeth in #2 should be white. I like #2 though but I'd try a vertical composition.

[acchildress]

#1. We need to see her eyes. Seeing only the whites gives here a zombie look that gives us no subject to draw us in.

#2. Needs a little hair light on the left to separate her from the background. I like the black background, I got "Thunder Grey". I didn't have the guts to go full black yet. Also the way her dress has opened at the top bothers me. See looks to young to be trying to show cleavage and I feel like a letch trying to see cleavage.

[vpnd]

lighten up #1 a little and cool it down slightly. #2 cool it down a little and it's done. good job

[fridayphunnies]

Thanks for all the comments.