Please critique these photos!!!! Thank you

[Jerrytrebec33]

Please critique, these were all taken by me :) In manual mode, unedited... I need some feedback to see how I am doing and all how I can take better shots... Thank you!!!

Jordan




http://www.saniukphotography.com/images/Picture%201.jpg

http://www.saniukphotography.com/images/Picture%202_0.jpg

http://www.saniukphotography.com/images/Picture%203_0.jpg

[Andy_T]

I really like the effect in the first one very much. Must have been difficult to expose.

However, they all look a bit soft to me. Third one looks completely out of focus.

Best regards,
Andy

[Jerrytrebec33]

Oh yea, on the third I took out noise on it and it blurred it lol. Thank you for the feedback tho... :)