My cousins

[ElPetao]

Hey, here I leave with you a picture of my cousin's, is made with 2 Vivitar 285 flash bounced into a wall and the other with a softbox (made with a shoebox)

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7488/primaszh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Edited by ElPetao, thanks valerism your exemple is good
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3726/primas2xa9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[valerism]

Cute kids... The background is so bright, but the kids are all nice and clear. The white is a little overwelming to me though :(

With a little brightness(-)/contrast(+) & saturation(+) bump I think it looks a little less... I dont know what the exact term would be... not necessarily washed out but less white...

They look like they were having a good time and it is really a nice sharp picture, it is just missing something that I clearly do not have the technical verbage to tell you what it is :) I could show you but no image editing...

[ElPetao]

Thank you for your comments proved to do what you say in Camera Raw to see that I get.

[robloeffel]

You've got some nice color combinations there. You just need to saturate it or darken it a bit.