critique pls

[jjeff]

newbies shoot......:o

[jjeff]

my first pic upload here. it looks like the 600 pixel limits the quality of the shoot...:(

[lomond]

It's an interesting shot and I like the idea.
You've obviously shot the image with the intention of having the grass in the scene. However I don't think it works, I find it a bit distracting.
Also I think I would have gone for a narrower depth of field.

Sorry if it sounds a bit negative, I do like the idea.

[cactusclay]

Nice composition, rythmn, repetition. I think more detail in the line would have helped and tone down the highlights a bit, but I like it.

[jjeff]

thanks, Lomond and cactusclay.


You all gave great ideas on how to improve it. yes, the almost same color of the background and the main interesting point makes it cannot stand out.

the grass in fact is the only standout things out of that pattern of mooring rope, which is what really interested me... maybe there is another way to shoot only the pattern of the rope....

jeff