Chinook Falls and rocks

[cramski]

I ve been really working on vieling shots lately, and think that this is the best I've done or can do at my skill level. Please be honest, I take imput very seriously. I want to get better.

[cramski]

I guess another way tho ask is----How could I improve these?


Thanks for your time!:D

[johneric8]

the only thing missing is a girl in a bikini in the water!

[solinger]

I guess another way tho ask is----How could I improve these?

I think you have done a great job with these! #1 loses a little detail in the shadows on the right for me, but that could be my monitor+compression.

[IainB]

They're great shots. I would like to see a little highlight among the rocks in the second picture perhaps.
Well done.

[Wendy Lilygreen]

Yep I agree with the others, you've done a good job with the water but the right side could do with either being cropped out or the details being brought in.
Forget the girl in a bikini, that would ruin it. What about a nice hunky male for a change?
Wendy

[Spirit]

The only thing I would do differently on that top pic is to pan it down JUST a hair. There's too much water on the bottom half (and it kind of bothers me that the rocks on the left are ALMOST centered), but aside from that, great shot. But I'm weird about the rule of thirds. lol! Composition is key.

LOVE the second pic. The water almost looks like fog. Great effect. :)

[cactusclay]

To get better, do what hasn't been done.