Christmas Bunnies

[KFormus]

So now that I am done with school I am going to start dedicating much more time to photography.

On this picture I used an ABR800 with 30" moon unit, a 580 ex II shot through umbrella, and the reflector kit. I think that my planning and composition were good, but my execution/final result is lacking to me? Any thoughts? Areas of improvement?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3171/3093236298_d85a65d95c_o.jpg

[FlyingPhotog]

Could you post it a bit bigger? You can go 1024x on the long side @ 150Kb...

[KFormus]

Bumped for bigger picture posted, thx flying.

[FlyingPhotog]

Cute... The lighting looks good but it might benefit from a bit more sharpening.

First thing that jumps out would be to move the ceramic tree closer to the larger rabbit and tighten the framing so you don't have the dead space to camera left of Santa.

Having done that, I'd then pan a little left and leave some "look space" in front of the smaller rabbit. His/Her nose is squished up against the edge of the frame.

Very patient bunny you have there with the antlers. Very cute idea but just sufferes a tad from the things mentioned above.

[KFormus]

Thx again, the torture will commence again tonight. Hopefully with faux snow.

[saintlover]

They are absolutely adorable!