First wedding...first album pages

[Valjoy]

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First real paid wedding...I did do a wedding of 'sorts' the week before this one.
I was nervous and excited at the same time. I have learned a lot from this first experience and hope to learn a lot more from your critique. The shots are not quite as creative as I would have liked..but the oppotunities were limited.
Thanks Val.........as you will see the groom hardly took his sunglasses off all day.!!!

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I hope the sizing in right on these...they are supposed to be 1024x 520

[Svetlana]

I think it looks really beautiful! On my first (and so far only :)) wedding the groom kept the glasses on almost the whole time...I'm not making the same mistake next time.
I'm sure the B&G will be happy with this album, you did a wonderful job!

[Visual Bride]

A good first album. A good starting point. You will only get better!

[Kissa]

it looks good the only thing is page 7 is a bit off in my opinion because everything is black and white except that one picture :) i would chagne it to B&W too but again that is just my opinion :)

[Valjoy]

Thanks for your comments....I appreciate the feedback, especially when I am just starting out in this business.
KISSA.. I was also unsure about page 7 so I have left it up to B&G.
Thanks Val

[Valjoy]

The bride and groom have just let me know ...they love the album and to go ahead with printing...no changes at all. This is good news for me, because I was very anxious about their response. All is well......cheers Val

[Ashyg]

i do like the way you have added in a little splash of colour into page 7 where majority of photos are black and white... but everyone has different tastes!

well done! you did a great job for your first album. the photos are lovely

[Valjoy]

Thanks Ashley.

[jsanz11]

I like it...really goood for a first album.

[FLphotoguy]

Very nice start. I'm sure that there will be many more paid shots to come.