Takamur Travailles

[scokar]

Hello,

Please C&C, straight out of the camera and LR2 using default settings to the best of my knowledge.

I'm trying to get better on doing the most i can before I snap the shutter (composition, etc).

Look forward to learning and improving.

Thank you.

edit: oops. no pix.

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2.
330566

*) I think both are overexposed
*) focus seems off on both
*) I should have included more of the feet in the 2nd picture

[Robert_Lay]

I think you need more effort in focusing and in providing an appropriate depth of field.

In my opinion the flower needs more DOF and the reaper needs the focal point to be on the man - not the scythe, and more DOF is needed.

[telephoto500]

maybe get a closer shot on the rose and keep the center in focus. i think a darker background would serve you better too.

[iN5P1R3]

Bob is giving you very good advice. He pretty much summed up what I would've said.