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azpix
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 02:57
Looking for some critiques on these.

this is a one is my 21month old on nis new tricycle:

http://www.coreyschimmel.com/tric.jpg


this is an announcement for our new baby. I took out the babys name but those are the fonts i will be using.

Feel free to be brutally honest.

http://www.coreyschimmel.com/announce.jpg
RebelChick
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 07:39
I love the announcement, so sophisticated and simple.
40piggies
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 09:51
Enjoyed both. The cripness in the first shot was great... he looks so proud.. boy and their toys! lol.
capt_tast
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 10:06
AWESOME TRICYCLE. The brith announcement is great too.
Good shots.
cdmonkey
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 15:23
both great shots
Top Fuel Photos
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 20:15
Thanks for the idea, I have to do a baby shot when my friends baby is born and that did it...
NotYourPsycho
5th of January 2009 (Mon), 20:53
only nitpick I have is I wish the shirt sleeve of the dad holding the baby wasn't showing.

otherwise lovely!
Kristy
6th of January 2009 (Tue), 10:17
Love the tricycle pic... :) Awesome! Looks great!

On the announcement.... are you doing a one-sided postcard? Because I'd like to see more pictures and a sweet verse.....

You can do a fold open card or a 2-sided postcard and add more...?
azpix
7th of January 2009 (Wed), 01:25
thanks all for the feedback and comments.