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Atlas_aus
7th of January 2009 (Wed), 06:25
Hi,

I have spent some time trying to improve my work over the last 18 months and are pretty happy with my progress, but it is always nice to hear other's opinions and get some feedback on how I could improve further :)

1.
http://www.justnicephotography.com.au/Alisha/_MG_4981a.jpg

2.
http://www.justnicephotography.com.au/Ashton/A/_MG_6374a.jpg

3.
http://www.justnicephotography.com.au/Brooke_N/_MG_2369a.jpg

4.
http://www.justnicephotography.com.au/Cindy/_MG_0465a%20copy.jpg

Thanks for looking :)
Atlas_aus
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 01:55
Howdy,

No comments ??
10megapixel
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 02:08
Very Nice...;)
Thomas G
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 02:49
1. Good colors and comp. My only nit pick is the deep pores above the middle of her top lip.
2. Good colors again. The background has a lot going on. The eyes are a little dark.
3. I just can't get into this shot at all.
4. Great color, Great composition! I may kiss that! :)
JoYork
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 03:43
The first image is excellent. However I'm not a fan of the skin smoothing you did in the second image.
griptape
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 13:59
I like the 1st one a lot. Nothing wrong with #2, but it's a little flat. Could have maybe used some fill flash. 3, there's a long wrong with to me. The bridge above her head is distracting, the strange astro turf looking grass bothers me, the background is a little too dark (up your ISO a little, even when you're using flash, and the background that your flash doesn't reach will still brighten up some), and the pose looks really akward. And I like 4, no complaints there.
Jethro790
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 14:00
Yep, I don't know why, but #4 is my favorite...
howaboutnow
18th of February 2009 (Wed), 16:55
Yep, I don't know why, but #4 is my favorite...
hahaha, I'm sure you don't eh....

Awesome pics!
Atlas_aus
21st of May 2009 (Thu), 03:16
Hi All,

Thanks for your comments.

I like the 1st one a lot. Nothing wrong with #2, but it's a little flat. Could have maybe used some fill flash. 3, there's a long wrong with to me. The bridge above her head is distracting, the strange astro turf looking grass bothers me, the background is a little too dark (up your ISO a little, even when you're using flash, and the background that your flash doesn't reach will still brighten up some), and the pose looks really akward. And I like 4, no complaints there.

This is a great tip, thanks very much, never thought of it like that :D