What do you guys think?

[iplayazi]

I was bored today and processed a couple previous shots form a wedding I took.

What do you guys think? Shots were taken a few months ago at my first wedding I have ever shot, series is here http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=486478
#1
http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/107915187/original.jpg

Did I over do it on the processing?
#2
http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/107915196/original.jpg

Better?
#3
http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/107915193/original.jpg

#4
http://www.pbase.com/iplayazi/image/107915183/original.jpg

Thanks for looking

Todd

[4mr4do4sho]

#1. Great picture and processing!

Between #2 and #3, I prefer #3. However, the glitter in her lips catches my attention and draws me away from her eyes. Maybe clone out some of the glitter in her lips.

#4. The hair in the eye is a little distracting and oh the stray hair on her face could be cloned out.

By the way, awesome pictures in your galleries!

[FlyingPhotog]

2 and 3 FTW...

I like #1 for composition but I've never been a big fan of processing non-glamour/fashion images in a way that makes human skin look sickly. (ie, purple/blue or yellow/green split toning...)

4 is nice and quite "edgy"

[adam8080]

I'm with FlyingPhotog on #1. I would loose some of the left side of the images though (crop right in the middle of her dress strap and the edge).

#3 > #2. They only thing that I would change would be the wrinkles on the forehead. They catch my eye as I'm following the light.

#4 doesn't do much for me. Maybe crop off the top 1/4 of the image? It is really tight everywhere but the top edge.

[iplayazi]

Good stuff guys! I'll work on some crops. I value your guy's opinions