Collapsed Water Tower-Black and White

[Sam|McGuire]

While exploring an abandoned military base I came across this water towe than had collapsed/been cut. I snapped about five photos and I'm still processing most of them. This is the first one I finished, I'd really like some C&C. Am I going in the right direction with these black and whites?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3096/3184076186_d9db2d3942_b.jpg

[John Hudson]

I would say no.

As this shot was loading I thought it looked promising as the sky looks amazing. However I struggle to identify the main structure and I feel it looks over processed. I love the wire hoops as a lead in though, that's very unusual.

John.

[Sam|McGuire]

Thanks John, I'll work on toning it down a bit. To be honest I had no idea what this was until I went inside. It is a massive water tower, two of the legs were cut and it fell on it's side. Then someone came a long and cut the top off. We are into the inside of the water tower.

Here's a shot from the other side.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3385/3184338439_8c76e132b9_b.jpg

[John Hudson]

Now the second shot is absolutely killer!

I still would never guess what it is, but that's hardly the point. If anything it reminds me of a WWII Zeppelin.

John.

[Tiger_993]

I like the second shot. Nice PP in that one - the sky and clouds look great.

[dufrenbk]

the second one is awesome man

[Sam|McGuire]

Thanks.

[Nikolas]

Second shot is a winner, absolutely awesome actually.

[Sam|McGuire]

Thanks! I'll be posting some more shots on my Flickr in the coming days.