Little Girl and Boy Studio photos C&C please

[PhotoTails]

This is my first time posting here. These were done for a client.
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk15/phototails/Sage01.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk15/phototails/Sage02.jpg

[bsaber]

The face in the second one looks weird. Nice shots though.

And welcome to the forum!

[tsdaita]

I Agree with bsaber. Nice shots.
One thing that distracting are the shadows of the fence and the girl are in opposite directions.

[cdmonkey]

nice shots, I think a little extra tweaking in pp is needed, lift the shadows a little, brighten up etc.

Also your name in the blue is distracting its competes for attention way to much, white would have been better.

[PhotoTails]

Thanks I wish I could take the fense shadow out but it one the Muslin background. Also I will start doing my copywrite in white.

[azpix]

I'm not a fan of the selective color here and there is too much background in the first photo imho.

[bobbyz]

To me they need more light on the subjects.

BTW - Welcome to the forum.