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paf_uk
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 14:28
Hi Guys

Just put a new wedding photography site up and I was wondering if you could cast your critical eyes over it please and let me have some feedback. First thing I will point out is that it is in flash and I know that will irk some of you but it is a personal preference (and much easier to build).

The address is www.af-photography.co.uk

Thanks

Paul
SOK
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 14:34
First thing I will point out is that it is in flash and I know that will irk some of you...

Doesn't irk me as such, it just means I can't see it! (Flash disabled on work PCs).

Sorry!
tim
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 15:06
The website's fine, nothing special, but not bad either. I found two spelling mistakes on your packages page.
paf_uk
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 15:39
Spellings have been changed
mezorn26
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 16:23
not a fan..I find the logo over the images to be very distracting..
paf_uk
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 17:01
not a fan..I find the logo over the images to be very distracting..

So, make the logo smaller, I have already got that on my to do list! anything else?
sigler
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 18:30
Well...it looks very cramped...the logo and menu over the pictures doesn't work for me. Your logo doesn't work for me either. (No offense)

Also, your images aren't really telling any sort of story. Why would the first image of your gallery be of a guy just sitting?

No offense, but I would try to get some more experience first.

Best wishes,

Rob
mezorn26
14th of January 2009 (Wed), 22:04
Well...it looks very cramped...the logo and menu over the pictures doesn't work for me. Your logo doesn't work for me either. (No offense)

Also, your images aren't really telling any sort of story. Why would the first image of your gallery be of a guy just sitting?

No offense, but I would try to get some more experience first.

Best wishes,

Rob


He did not ask for comments on his images...;);)
SOK
15th of January 2009 (Thu), 00:38
He did not ask for comments on his images...;);)

I was wondering if you could cast your critical eyes over it please and let me have some feedback.

? :confused:
Peacefield
15th of January 2009 (Thu), 08:24
I thought it was nice enough. It works elegantly and has a clear appearance. I've been to sites that made me go wow. I didn't do that here, but thought it looked very good and it represents you very well.
Sauk
15th of January 2009 (Thu), 11:38
I am getting a network timeout trying to connect to it
paf_uk
15th of January 2009 (Thu), 14:54
He did not ask for comments on his images...;);)

No, but any comments are welcomed. This is my first design, and I am trying to learn what will attract prospective new clients.

Do you think my packages idea works, or is better to have set in stone packages?
paf_uk
15th of January 2009 (Thu), 14:54
I thought it was nice enough. It works elegantly and has a clear appearance. I've been to sites that made me go wow. I didn't do that here, but thought it looked very good and it represents you very well.

Thanks for that, I am working on getting the Wow factor built in over time!!