merry go round

[L Pagan]

shot with a 10D and my old 28-80mm Lens, on board flash.at night and it was moving
shutter 1/60, Aperture f4.0, ISO 100, I think it come out pretty good. Please comments welcome


http://www.pbase.com/lpagan/image/41047965.jpg

thank you
luis

[L Pagan]

Please a comment , any comment , something. not to anyone's liking or interest . or is it that my picture's or that boring ..



luis

[flyfisher]

The photo doesn't show up for me just a red x.

[WELFARECHEESE99]

i think that with a little cropping, it makes a great picture of a cute little kid!

[DwightMcCann]

Looks like she's riding uphill so maybe you need a little CW rotation. Cropping would be good, too, but not so close in front as wellfare. I'd also consider "warming" it up a tad, perhaps slight white balance change. Could you get closer?

[dandan]

there are a lot of sharpening and jpeg artifacts around her face.

and like said before.. try warrming it up a bit

[Elbee19]

I agree with the people who offer the advice to warm the photo up a bit. Because you've used a flash, it really cast a harsh light on your subject. The composition and subject are great though!

[L Pagan]

thank you .thats what iam looking for, help from the forum . this is how i learn to improve my photo skills. this is how the picture come out from the camera except for the sharping. i also need to learn more about photoshop to improve (help) my pictures.
once again thank you for your comments .
luis