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yeahsonn
22nd of January 2009 (Thu), 18:29
this is my first wedding that i shot a couple months back.. let me know what you think!! CC strongly welcomed!

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q208/22blahblahblah/kissonbeach.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q208/22blahblahblah/_.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q208/22blahblahblah/grace.jpg

Ziffle
22nd of January 2009 (Thu), 18:57
Nice set.
On number 3 - crop in to remove the chairs (left/right) and the second curtain.
It will bring more presence to the good lookin' bride.

Thanks for sharing.

yeahsonn
22nd of January 2009 (Thu), 23:30
thanks! i was thinking about cropping out the chairs..but i didnt even realize the curtain to be a distraction..but now that you mention it..looks like im gonna go and crop! haha

Suedezu
23rd of January 2009 (Fri), 02:07
Congratulations on getting some good pictures on your first wedding!

I like all 3 pictures you posted with number 2 as a favorite for being such a good candid shot.

In number 1 I would have centered the couple a little bit more leaving less space on the left side. But this is a minor niggle. I know how fast things are unfolding while shooting a wedding.

Number 2 seems a bit unsharp .This may be due to the small size or the aperture used.

yeahsonn
23rd of January 2009 (Fri), 02:41
i forgot to mention that the little girl in the second shot is their daughter!

thanks for the input!

TTGator
23rd of January 2009 (Fri), 11:48
Looks like the girl in the background of #2 just tripped and is about to eat paving stone :(

yeahsonn
24th of January 2009 (Sat), 23:11
hahha i was thinking the same thing.

avidstarr
25th of January 2009 (Sun), 03:34
i agree to the suggestions regarding #3
~ #1 is a cool concept, but the white crease where their noses touch isnt cool >_< watch for that next time.