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Poster Of U
22nd of March 2005 (Tue), 21:09
Zane,
Let me now what you think, The only thing I think I would change is the apeture so his nose is in focus.
10D 135 2.0 ISO 800
Poster Of U
23rd of March 2005 (Wed), 20:14
This was the original before it was PhotoShoped
Dante King
23rd of March 2005 (Wed), 22:20
I like the effect.
Michaelmjc
23rd of March 2005 (Wed), 22:41
His eyes are still green in the black and white, very cool. Not a bad shot, the hair is kind of distacting though.
Poster Of U
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 18:49
Thanks for the replies and the suggestions.
Andy_T
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:00
Hi James,

nice, but the DOF is a little bit too shallow for me.

Best regards,
Andy
Rubbahumpy
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:12
To tell you the truth i jumped out of my chair. Sorry
theman
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:19
I just submitted the same kind of image, I think its real cool
Poster Of U
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:45
Hi James,

nice, but the DOF is a little bit too shallow for me.

Best regards,
Andy

Yeah the DOH is to shallow, I was shooting a B-ball game and I didn't change the apeture. should have at least changed it enough to get his hair and nose in focus.
Poster Of U
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:46
To tell you the truth i jumped out of my chair. Sorry
So jumping out of your chair is a bad thing?
Barb42
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 19:55
Back off a bit and get more of the face in the frame. And avoid the dead on look, try for a slight side angle. Don't worry about the color tricks until you have the composition down pat. You might want to check out a book on portraiture and try some examples. He looks like he would make a good model. Talk to him about him while you take the picture. If you do you will get a better tranfer of emotion out the eyes.
Poster Of U
8th of April 2005 (Fri), 20:18
Back off a bit and get more of the face in the frame. And avoid the dead on look, try for a slight side angle. Don't worry about the color tricks until you have the composition down pat. You might want to check out a book on portraiture and try some examples. He looks like he would make a good model. Talk to him about him while you take the picture. If you do you will get a better tranfer of emotion out the eyes.

Barb thanks for the imput. Check out this thread I took these about 4 weeks after the one of Zane Click Me!