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endlessdream
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 12:58
Hello all, I played around with this photo today.
This is HDR from single RAW file, done in Photomatix, opened in CS4 and burned the sky/dodged the car, cropped the right side of the photo..
Any suggestions on composition or anything? I didn't want to have it center positioned so I cropped it...
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7210/a4shdrppff4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
lambocars
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 14:09
It is really nice, with an intimidating color scheme, nicely done. Also your decision to put it offset to the right was well done, I would put the car either lower of higher in the shot to get it to intersect with the Rule of Thirds ... however sometimes you have to divert from the rules ...
It is nice, only thing I would really change is the license plate, either remove it before the shot or get rid of it in pp.
Mark
PhotosGuy
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 14:20
I like it except for the poles growing out of the top.
amd is the best
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 14:54
Beautiful B8! Very nice sunset as well.
Nick
Caspita
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 16:41
I like it except for the poles growing out of the top.
+1 you need to clone those light poles ASAP. Besides that the mood of the picture is nice, very well put image.
Padrino
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 21:58
Pretty cool pic. Just get rid of the poles.
howaboutnow
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 23:48
Nice! Any more??
camerageorge
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 05:37
With the poles gone it would be a very nice image :)
endlessdream
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 07:36
Thanks for the comments and suggestions. I cloned out the poles and blurred the license plate..I like it better without the poles.
I have another one but I don't really like it..
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3776/a4shdrcoutyz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
silvias13
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 10:07
Cool shot! Got anymore pics?
Avi
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 10:34
yeah...it looks amazing without the poles..
thanks for sharing
Avi
Gorveatt
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 10:39
Much better with the poles gone. Very nice shot of a very nice car :)
BTR_FTW
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 20:32
nice without the poles.
but i think you brought even MORE attention to the license plate by blurring it out.
i think you should remove it all together.
Padrino
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 21:34
Come on, Endlessdream, the crowd is asking for more, bring the other image. This one got fantastic with the poles cloned off...
ChadAndreo
28th of January 2009 (Wed), 23:06
Thats a really nice shot.
ProjektSol
29th of January 2009 (Thu), 00:00
great pic got anymore?
endlessdream
29th of January 2009 (Thu), 07:39
Thanks everyone.
nice without the poles.
but i think you brought even MORE attention to the license plate by blurring it out.
i think you should remove it all together.
Yes, it seems so...But what should I do with it, it doesn't bother me when it's visible...and when I make it all black it doesn't look good.
Come on, Endlessdream, the crowd is asking for more, bring the other image. This one got fantastic with the poles cloned off...
Haha, thanks! Unfortunately I've got just one another shot which isn't good...I wasn't out that day shooting cars so I didn't even paid attention really, just took 2 random shots.
But I'll do my best next time and take more photos when I see some cool car...I wish I had EOS back when Zonda F was here in town..:mad:
mouettus
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 09:47
I think I'll be the only one to say that but I really like it with the license plate... it really matches the german/european look of the car.
Could you post your original untouched picture as well as the settings you used??
endlessdream
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 09:57
Thanks..Here is original image, straight from camera:
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/189/img5043orignalgk7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
vs. PP
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3776/a4shdrcoutyz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Now when I look it, maybe I made the colors too strong?
Post processing is HDR and Tonemapping in Photomatix, used the burn tool on the sky, cloned out the poles and blurred the plate...
silvias13
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 11:06
Now when I look it, maybe I made the colors too strong?
I think it looks cool the way it is.
LostShootingStar
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 11:07
Great work on the PP. The original image is nothing spectacular, but the enhanced color and tone make it look like a magazine ad. http://m08o1124znfu179.imageshacknow.info/img/2465/j08o1214ldqc/thumb.gif
Tortie
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 11:11
Wow, great PP. I thought the picture was great to begin with but after seeing the original, I really give it to you! :]
Photo-by-Leal
30th of January 2009 (Fri), 18:32
Much much better.......
angel m. leal jr.
Thanks for the comments and suggestions. I cloned out the poles and blurred the license plate..I like it better without the poles.
I have another one but I don't really like it..
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3776/a4shdrcoutyz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
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