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mhart008
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 15:28
These are from a recent family shoot I did for a Co-Worker. It was my first time shooting family Portraits. I want to get feedback on some of the Candid/Individual images that I really like.

#1
http://www.matthartman.com/potn/H_Port1a.jpg

#2
http://www.matthartman.com/potn/H_Port2a.jpg

#3
http://www.matthartman.com/potn/H_Port3a.jpg

#4
http://www.matthartman.com/potn/H_Port4a.jpg

C&C Appreciated

philthejuggler
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 17:46
Some good shots here.

Advice:

1) Would have been better if framed so subject towards the left of the frame instead of central.

2) Nice shot, wants some post processing to improve the punch. If a wider aperture on your lens was available it would have been worth opening up to further blur the background.

3) Nice image but I think the B/W conversion could be better - I'm not an expert at PP, but it is a bit stark and constrasty looking for my tastes.

4) Love it.

philthejuggler
27th of January 2009 (Tue), 18:05
Had a play with no.2. Doesn't look fantastic as I have slightly over-sharpened a low-res file, but has a little more pop in my opinion.

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