End of Life Series 1 Cycle

[mangaloreaviators]

Hello All,

C and C please.
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[Hamster_Huey]

I know the look you are going for, and I think it would work but I really do not like this extreme yellow tone. Also the rubble at the bottom right is distracting and doesn't do anything for me. I would have preferred if you had cropped it the other way with more space in front of the bike than behind it.

Cheers

[Haru]

I know the look you are going for, and I think it would work but I really do not like this extreme yellow tone. Also the rubble at the bottom right is distracting and doesn't do anything for me. I would have preferred if you had cropped it the other way with more space in front of the bike than behind it.

Cheers

I kind of agree with this. I don't mind the color, and the position of the rubble isn't bothering me as much as the rubble itself. If it was a more common object like a trash can, or crate, it wouldn't distract me so much. Also the is hardly any seperation with the corner of the wall and the continuation of the wall behind it. Maybe a little more lighting on the bike vs the background to draw some more attention to it would have kept my eyes from woundering around.