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slm95
3rd of February 2009 (Tue), 19:03
Critque and comments appriciated.
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6624/pointykj8.jpg

LeuceDeuce
3rd of February 2009 (Tue), 19:13
Very nicely done.

For me, the improvements in this image would come from:

Correct the keystoning in the background.
Clone out the small shadow on the bottom left.
Reduce (not eliminate) the vignette. It's just a tad strong.Again, great shot.

tonydee
4th of February 2009 (Wed), 12:50
Agree with everything above. Plus - minor things - I find the orange poles distracting - particularly the one that appears to be holding up the right (from our perspective) side of the plane ;-). I also find the plane's shadow overly harsh, such that it pulls the eye down and away from the plane itself. Bit of dodging/curves or something could help. It's good to have the edges that define the outline of the parts of the plane not competing with complexities in the background... for example: the black car, or the security camera below the AVITAT sign. One way (not necessarily the best or practical) to avoid that overlap is to take the photo from a slightly higher angle,

Cheers, Tony

Robbierob
4th of February 2009 (Wed), 12:55
the guys above have nailed the CC. I like the image ..well done. I find the orange cones the most distracting aspect of the image, however, being a pilot myself, if it isnt your bird, then you dont wanna go moving the cones...LOL