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serissolutions
25th of March 2005 (Fri), 22:56
http://www.serissolutions.com/photos/images/Travel/Charlsetown_MA.jpg

Titus213
27th of March 2005 (Sun), 23:01
I've been looking at this picture with my wife (artist) and we really like it. It creates a nostalgic mood for us, well balanced, nicely framed. The whole tone of the image is great.

Killed
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 04:26
nice pic, liking the tone and the sepia effect

mal
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 07:01
the ever slight crookedness kind of bothers me.

LisaMarie
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 07:11
1:nice post processing looks good tonal wise
2: it does need to be ever so slightly straightened * (only my professional voice popping up- force of habit - many others wouldn't even notice )
3: it's Charlestown - ( might want to check your text added to the photo ;) )

Do you live in Chucktown ?

johneric8
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 11:06
just waiting for fat alber and the gang to come strolling out there for some b-ball

serissolutions
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 13:52
1:nice post processing looks good tonal wise
2: it does need to be ever so slightly straightened
3: it's Charlestown - ( might want to check your text added to the photo ;) )

Do you live in Chucktown ?

Yes it does need to be straightened, great observation.
Oops on the spelling.. My bad...

Thank you so much for the compliments! I am very new at this but I have always had an eye for photography and art in general. I am finally pursuing my passion.
I have been shooting for 2 months. I am wearing my camera out!

serissolutions
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 13:54
I've been looking at this picture with my wife (artist) and we really like it. It creates a nostalgic mood for us, well balanced, nicely framed. The whole tone of the image is great.

Thank you so much. I am humbled by your compliments. I am very green when it comes to photography, only a couple of months and 4 books!

Here is another I really like. you may have seen it in another thread:

http://www.serissolutions.com/photos/images/Travel/Hyannis_MA.jpg

serissolutions
29th of March 2005 (Tue), 13:55
the ever slight crookedness kind of bothers me.

Look again. I think the building is not straight.